Thursday, September 29, 2011

Fan Fiction Corner

A new entry here. I have written fan fiction in the past, and it was very well received. This is my very first Doctor Who story, hope you all enjoy it. As always, comments are very welcome!



Doctor Who

“ The Vengeance Factor “

By

Kevin Scott Bolinger


   The automatic lighting currently had the empty corridor in darkness. All of a sudden, the lights at the far end began to illuminate. An unearthly sound began to fill the corridor, echoing everywhere.  A shape began to shimmer into existence. As it took form, it began to resemble a blue police box.  With an odd thump, the TARDIS had landed at it’s latest destination.
     Inside, the Doctor, the last of the Time Lord from the planet Gallifrey, checked over the control console surrounding the time rotor. Amy Pond, the fiery Scottish red head, and her somewhat goofy looking, but dedicated husband Rory Williams, came into the control room from the corridor leading to their bedroom, Amy bouncing down the stairwell, smiling, while Rory had a puzzled look on his face.
     “Ok Doctor,” Rory began, “Where have you taken us this time?”  Rory always seemed to ask this, due to the fact the Doctor had a knack for getting them into dangerous situations, something Rory was coming to despise. Just last week they had answered a distress call, and he and Amy ended up in a dollhouse, in a boys closet, chased by evil wooden dolls.
      “Ah, Rory!” the Doctor began in his usual manic style, clasping his hands in front of his chest as he gleefully moved around. “We are currently in a corridor, on the human  colony of Pequis, located on the planet Felstar, in the year 4063. Beyond that, I really cannot tell you more.” he said with a wink.
      Amy chimed in next. “Then why bring us here, you big goof.” she teased, the Doctor was her best friend, and she trusted him with her life.
      “That, Pond, is a very simple answer.” the Doctor said as he made his way to the TARDIS doors. “I have never been here before.” He turned back to look at her with a smile, and went through the doors that concealed the fact  that the blue box was far larger on the inside…and walked right into a group of soldiers pointing guns at him. As he was raising his hands in surrender, Amy and Rory also came through the door, bounding into him.
     “Ah, right, guns.”  he said, taken back a bit, “ I suppose an explanation is in order. And why not, mysterious blue box shows up in your  hallway, three people walk out of said box, and I am talking too much, aren’t I. I really must learn to keep silent.”
     A grizzled and worn man with one eye covered in a shiny metal eye patch stepped forward. “That would be wise, considering you are all trespassing on my colony. Give me one reason why I should not have you all shot on site. “
      “Well, “ the Doctor said, beginning to reach into his jacket, causing the men to re-aim their weapons just at him. “Um, if you would let me get to my credentials.” The leader motioned for his men to stand down for the moment. The Doctor reached into his tweed jacket and pulled out the small document holder containing his psychic paper, allowing those to look at it to see what the Doctor needed them to see.  The leader took it from him.
        “Says here you are a group of inspectors, from Earth. Why did Earth send you? I told them I could handle this problem myself. “ The one eyed man looked annoyed.
         “Ah well, I think formalities are in order first. I am the Doctor, by the way, and these are my assistants , Amy and Rory. “ The Doctor had regained his confidence, as he took back his psychic paper.
         “The name is Commander John Habbard, This is my colony, and these are my troops. “ The Doctor offered him his hand, but Habbard refused it.
        “Well then, Commander Habbard, “ the Doctor said, clapping his hands together  in front of him, “the next order of business should be, what sort of problem?”
       “I will not discuss it here in this hallway. Let us go to my office, where we can talk alone. “ Habbard motioned for his soldiers to disperse. All but one, a rather imposing looking woman with blond hair, left to return to their duty stations. The commander did not wait to see  if the Doctor and his companions were following, he just briskly began to walk away. The Doctor  looked back at his friends and smiled. They all set off after the Commander, the female soldier following behind. Rory looked at Amy and raised his eyes.
    “Here we go again.” he mumbled. His wife gave him a soft jab in the ribs.
    “Not now.” she warned.
   They walked down numerous corridor, past what looked like a mess hall for the troops stationed there. The then walked into a rotunda area, with doors leading to other  parts of the colony, many of them reading “civilians.”  Located centrally between the military and civilian areas, was the Commanders office. A large imposing metal door opened as they approached.
    The interior was spartan. The commander had a desk, a communications screen and a few chairs. He did not even have a simple desk plant. Everything inside was done in shades of grey. The Commander  sat behind his desk and offered a chair to the Doctor.  As the Doctor  sat in the proffered seat, the Commander was busy looking over the screen on his desk. Rory watched him, figuring he was looking at data concerning the colony. When Habbard seemed satisfied with what he had looked at, he looked up at his guests.
    “I am going to ask you once again, and please, do not lie.” The Commander shot the female soldier, who had stayed with them entering the  office, a glance. She quickly nodded back at him.
    The Doctor looked Habbard right in the eye. “I told you, I’m the Doctor, and this is Amy and Rory. Beyond that, there really isn’t much more to tell.”
    Habbard grunted. “I’m sure.”
    Rory looked at the Doctor, a small amount of nervousness on his face.
    “Well then, Doctor, what is there to keep me from locking the three of you in my brig and allowing you to rot?” Habbard warned.
    “I suspect the nature of your problem, Commander Habbard, “ answered the Doctor.  “I believe the old saying is, you have bigger fish to fry, so to speak. At the moment, the three of us are a mere inconvenience. Now, I will ask again,” he said with a smirk, “ what seems to be your problem?”
   The Commander chuckled, a dark laugh, devoid of all humor. “Very well, not as if you three will be of much help. This colony has recently come under attack. The perpetrator is a rather large creature, many times the size of a human. Its skin is grey, it has what appears to be worn animal skins as a loin cloth, of sorts. Piercing yellow eyes, and teeth that would scare a lion.  It seems to be a native resident, though all scans of the planet done years ago showed no such beast here. It appears the scans were in error.”
    “It would appear so,” the Doctor agreed, “please, do go on.”
    “We have only been in operation a few short months. Several civilians had gone missing, no trace ever found. Then, one day, the creature was spotted, walking away with one of them. Since no one has ever been found, we assume the latest victim has been killed as well.”
    “I see,” the Doctor said as he pondered this new information. “You know, I must warn you, Commander, in my experience, assumption can be a dangerous thing.”
    “Doctor, I will make any assumption I need to. I will make this beast pay with its blood! “ The Commander was clearly very agitated. “For you see, Doctor, the last victim was my son, my only child. I saw it take him with my own eye! It snatched him up, and I gave chase, sending several rounds of ammunition the creatures way. It seemed to shrug them off. It moved to fast for me to follow, but I saw where it went, towards the caves a few short hours walk from here, just beyond the trees. I say to you , Doctor, I will have the beasts head!” He had gotten to his feet and had leaned into the Doctors face from across the desk. The Doctor was unfazed.
     When the Commander sat back down, the Doctor spoke, softly, yet with authority. “You will take such a creature down, by yourself?” he asked.
     The Commander looked up at the blond soldier. “Captain Buckster,  assemble the troops in the mess.” he ordered. With a nod, the Captain left the office to do as ordered.
     “So, this creature, which you know nothing about, mind you, hurt you. And nothing will keep you from having your revenge. I wonder Commander Habbard, “ the Doctor said, his eyes burning deeply into the Commanders glance, “what sort of cost your vengeance will entail?”
     Habbard glared at him, then snarled, “ The only cost will be paid by that foul beast, Doctor. Mark my words.”
     The Doctor looked down, and spoke with a far softer tone. “What was his name? Your son, what was his name?”
      The Commander seemed to sag a bit, but it was almost unnoticeable.  “James, after my own father. He was just ten years old, and he had his mothers eyes. You see, I lost my wife to an accident when James was very young. He is all I had left of her. That beast took the only goodness I had left in this universe. I promised to keep him safe, and that creature made me break that promise. Death to the beast is the only thing that will bring me justice!” He closed his one good eye and brought his clasped hands to his mouth.
    “That creature’s death will not bring your son back.” the Doctor said, barely above a whisper.
   As the Commander was about to retort, the screen on his desk beeped for his attention. “Are you ready, Captain?” he asked the monitor, knowing who had paged him.
    Captain Buckster’s voice came from the speakers. “Yes sir, Commander, assemble and awaiting your presence.”
    Without reply, he terminated the connection and stood. “Come, Doctor, let me show you how we plan to deal with this problem.” Again, he did not wait for them to join him, but opened the door and walked out, towards the mess hall. The Doctor stood, Amy and Rory close behind. Rory did not look pleased.
    “I really think we should go this time, Doctor.” Rory said, his voice indicating he was serious. “We are clearly not wanted here.”
   “That has never stopped me before.” the Doctor muttered to himself, and he strode off after the Commander.
   “Great!” Rory exclaimed, throwing his hands up in disgust, “Just great, he never listens to me.” As he looked, he noticed Amy had walked off following the Doctor. With a shake of his head he followed. “Wait, I’m coming too.” he said at last.

    The trio entered the mess and made their way towards the middle, where Commander Habbard and Captain Buckster awaited them. On the opposite side of the Commander stood a rather large and imposing alien, his skin a mauve tone, yet slightly scaly. He was covered with marking from his home world, and from his tiny ears hung huge golden hoops. He looked down at the Doctor and leered a mischievous grin.
    The Doctor walked right over to him and looked up. “You must be from the planet Queeg, great hunters, your people. “ the Doctor sniffed in arrogance. “ What brought you here, I wonder?”
    The alien chuckled. “Aye,  my name is Tagoo. Even among my own kind, I am considered the best. I am here because the Commander is here.” he said stiffly.
    “I see. So you owe him a life debt sort of thing?” the Doctor asked, not taking his eyes from Tagoo’s.
    “Yes, he saved my life during a hunt that ended in disaster. Where he goes, I go.” Tagoo looked up and pumped his chest.
    The Doctor began to walk away, “I hope that dept does not cost you your life.” he said softly. Tagoo looked down at him, a small sneer on his lips as the Doctor went back to his companions.
    “Are you quite done, Doctor?” The Commander asked brusquely .
    “I am all ears, Commander.” The Doctor replied with a hand gesture.
    “ Very well.” Habbard began. “Men, what is our purpose here this day?”
    As one, they all sang out. “TO HUNT THE BEAST!”
    “And what will we do when we track it down?” asked Habbard of his men.
   “WE KILL IT!” again, said in unison.
   “That’s right. You have all sworn an oath to me to see this through. “ the Commander said, almost menacingly . Then, quickly he shouted out. “DEATH TO THE BEAST!”
   As if chanting, his men repeated it. “DEATH TO THE BEAST! DEATH TO THE BEAST!” Over  and over they  continued, the noise becoming deafening.
   As all this was going on, the Doctor kept moving his head around the room, as if searching for something.  He began to back away towards the far side of the room, Amy and Rory in tow. As it began to quiet down some, Amy got close to the Doctor’s ear.
     “What are you looking for, Doctor.” she asked, having notice his mannerisms.
     He answered her  while still glancing around. “I am looking for the mast with the gold doubloon nailed to it.”
      With a puzzled look, Amy asked, “The what?”
      “Never mind, ancient history.” he replied with a worried look on his face. “We really need to get back to the TARDIS.”
       “Finally!” Rory said with an exasperated breath.
       “We aren’t leaving.” the Doctor said with a glare towards Rory.
       “Of course not.” Rory frowned.
   The Commander made his way over to them. ”You see Doctor, all loyal to me. Everyone of them have sworn a blood oath!” He grinned, but it was a very frightening sight to behold.
    The Doctor tilted his head to look at him, his face cold and emotionless. “The trouble with blood oaths is, they involve blood.”  The Doctor turned his head away from Habbard. “You wont mind if my assistants and I retire for the evening to our transport?”
    “You mean that blue box you walked out of?” The Commander asked, looking a bit puzzled.
    “It has…sentimental value.” The Doctor replied.
     “I am sure more comfortable quarters can be arranged. “ The Commander offered.
     “The box will be fine.” said the Doctor.
       “Suit yourself.” He glanced over at Captain Buckster. “Captain, escort them to their little blue box, if you please.”
      “Right away sir.” She saluted, the looking towards the three travelers, “This way, please.”
  They all walked out of the mess and started back the way they had originally came. The Doctor held back, getting closer to Buckster. When they were clear of the mess hall, he began to strike up a conversation.
     “So, Captain Buckster, do you have a first name, or is it just Captain?” He said pleasantly
     “If you must no, my name is Elisabeth, but you will refer to me as Captain.” she replied, straight laced.
     “I noticed, Captain,” he said with his hands clasped in front of him, his head glancing towards the ceiling “That during all the chanting back there, you were oddly quiet, and you were staring at the floor.”
     She did not flinch, “I was not in a chanting mood.” she said simply.
     “Oh don’t give me that.” the Doctor continued. “I have been around soldiers many times in my life. I have also been around more lunatics then I care to admit. I see it in your eyes, even now. You do not approve of what is going on here.”
     She grew a bit cross at this. “I do as I am commanded, sir, nothing more.”
     “Do not insult me, Captain, I am quite good at reading people. You want this to stop.” He turned to face her directly. “Help me stop this, before more lives are lost. Help me end this madness.”
     They had reached the TARDIS, the Captain stared straight into the Doctor’s eyes. “I will do my duty. Goodnight, Doctor.” she spat out, turning and walking away at a brisk, angry  pace.
     The Doctor stood there a moment, watching her walk away, disappointment on his face. Amy and Rory had already gone inside the TARDIS. With a sigh, he turned and opened the door. As he walked in, he returned one last glance at Captain Buckster, then shut the door. He leaned against it with his head in his hands.
     Amy looked at him, concerned. “What’s wrong Doctor?”
     “Fools,” he breathed, “ the whole lot of them.” He began to walk back towards the control console, then turned to face Rory. “Rory, I have a job for you.”
    “A job?” Rory asked, a bit surprised. “For me?”
     “Of course for you..” the Doctor said, sounding agitated. “I need you to track down Captain Buckster. Tell her I sent you to apologize for my rudeness. That should get her attention. However, I also need you to determine where she truly stands in all this.”
     “But, Doctor…” Rory began, but was quickly cut off.
     “No buts, Rory, just do it!” the Doctor snapped. “This is important!”
    Rory glared at him, and stormed off towards the doors, slamming them behind him.
     Amy looked from the slammed doors then to the Doctor, her arms crossed in anger. “Oy, Don’t you snap at my husband like that again, raggedy man!”
     He looked her in the eye. “Not now Amy!”
     “Yes now.” she spat at him. “None of this secretive nonsense. Right  now, you tell me. What is going on here?”
     His eyes looked away from her and back towards the doors. “Oh, Pond. Haven’t you figured it out yet? Ahab needs to hunt his white whale.”

      As Rory was walking away from the TARDIS, he was grumbling to himself, moving his arms in anger as he did so. “Every time! He does this, every, single time! I am getting sick and tired of how he treats us. We are not his pets!” He continued on like this as he made his way to the most logical place he could think of, the mess hall.
     By the time he got there, most of the soldiers had dispersed,. Still mumbling to himself, Rory ran smack into something large and immobile. He looked up and noticed it was Tagoo.
      “You lost, little man?” the large alien asked with a twisted grin.
      “Ah, sorry, Tagoo. No, no, not lost, simply in need of a late night snack.” Rory nervously replied. With that he made his way to a cabinet, and pulled out the first things he saw, a can of tuna and some crackers.  Tagoo chuckled as he walked away.
      Rory, his snack in hand, looked around the room.  His gamble had paid off, with luck, in the far corner sat Captain Buckster, picking at her own late meal. He walked over towards her and cleared his throat as he approached.
      “Uh, Captain,” He began, “I would like to apologize for the Doctor’s rudeness. Sometimes that man can be very infuriating.”
      “He sent you, didn’t he?” She glared up at Rory.
      “Yes, yes he did, much to my chagrin.” Rory stared up at the ceiling.
      “You might as well take a seat and eat, though I will not be much company at the moment.” She offered the chair across from hers. Rory took it and opened the top of the tuna tin, then the crackers.
      The Captain watched him eat for a few moments, then began to speak. “Look, I know who and what he is. Our records may not be the most complete, but it showed me enough. He is not human. He has been known to change his face, though I am not sure I believe that.”
     “Yeah, well,” Rory began, bur Buckster cut him off.
“One thing I can tell you that our records show. He is a great meddler. Always sticking his nose where it doesn’t belong.” She said angrily.
     “Tell me about it.” Rory said, looking away, and up towards the ceiling.
     “What really burns me up though, most of the records we have on him show that most of the time, he is right.” She sighed.
     Rory tried to lighten the mood a bit. “If it is any consolation, I can tell you I have been around him when he is wrong. It is not a pretty sight.”  Rory ended up frowning himself at that. The disaster at Demon’s Run, still fresh in his mind.
     They were quiet for a few moment, then the Captain began to speak softly. “Look, whether he is right or wrong does not matter. I cannot go against the Commander. That would be treason. I hope this Doctor of yours has something cleaver up his sleeve to end this madness, before it is too late.”
     Rory sighed, “I am sure he does, he always does.”  With a small frown he went back to eating his tuna and crackers. The Captain, finished with her meal, excused herself, leaving Rory alone.

      Rory had only been away from the TARDIS a few moments. The Doctor was pacing back and forth, thinking, muttering to himself.  Finally, with  a mighty, “AHA!” he ran over to the control console. Then he looked at the still slightly peeved Amy.
     “I have a job for you, Pond.” he smiled.
     “Oh, so now it’s me you have a job for. After you recent behavior, I am not sure I want to help.”  With that, she turned her back on him.
      He ignored her attitude for the moment. “This one is simple, while I am gone, have the TARDIS run a scan of this planet. Tell her to look for all indigenous species and see if any fit the Commander’s description. Also, have her look for anything unusual, out of place, so to speak.” He began to stride back towards the blue doors.
      “Wait, you’re leaving?” Amy asked, a bit shocked. “And where are you going?”
       “I am going to have another chat with our good friend Commander Habbard. There are still a few key pieces of information I need.” He continued his walk to the doorway.
      “You gonna try and get on his good side? I doubt he even has one.” She quipped. “ How are you going to manage that?”
      As he reached the doors, he turned back with a smirk. “Simple, just call me Ishmael.” And with that he was gone, and Amy set about setting up the scan he had asked for.

      None of the soldiers even made a move to stop him,  all of them having seen the Doctor standing with Habbard in the mess hall earlier. He reached his destination fairly quickly, and gently tapped his knuckles on the door.
       “Yes, what is it?” came the gruff reply form inside.
       The Doctor stuck his head inside and smiled. “Mind if we continue our chat from earlier?”
        Habbard looked up with a bit of a glare. “I should have known it was you, Doctor. Very well, come on in and have a seat.”
      The Doctor closed the door behind him, sat down and crossed his lower legs. “I was hoping I could join the hunt. It looks like you are planning to set out at first light, am I correct?”
      The Commander nodded an affirmative, then added, “I am not sure this hunt would sit well with you Doctor. To me, you just do not have that killer instinct.” He was goading the Doctor a bit.
      The Doctor merely sighed and looked down at the floor. “Oh how I wish that were true.” he frowned.
       Habbard stood up and looked out a very small window in his office, hands clasped behind his back. “This is war, Doctor. Something I fear you know nothing about.  I will not be denied my revenge.”
       “Of that, I have no doubt.” the Doctor said, still fairly quiet. “I only urge you to proceed with a bit of caution. “
       The Commander chuckled a bit, again, it was tainted with darkness. “Caution, you say. I actually expect that from you, Time Lord.”
       The last bit got the Doctor’s undivided attention. “How did you know?” he asked.
        “How could I not? There are agencies on Earth that have records of some of your activities.  Oh  yes, your face may change from time to time, but you are the very same man, and wherever you go, disaster follows in your wake.”
        The Doctor was now glaring. “Disaster happens when  stubborn beings like you fail to head my warnings. I tell you now, sir, abandon this fruitless bloodlust, before it fully consumes you.”
        Habbard turned around now, and put his hands on the edges of his desk so he could lean in closer to the Doctor. “What do you know of loss, Doctor? How can you, a time traveler, able to go wherever you wish, ever know of loss?”
        The Doctor was quickly on his feet, the now familiar fire of anger showing on his face. “You foolish human,” he began, a deadly quietness to his voice. “You could never know the amount of pain, guilt and loss I carry around after nearly one thousand years of life. You insult me sir.”  The age in his eyes was showing now, as he stared down the Commander. “There is one thing your records will never tell you about me. I am the last of my kind. You speak of war?  You know nothing of the true horrors of war. Your simple human mind could never comprehend the terrors my eyes have seen in all my long years.”
        He began to make his way to the door, as he opened it, he shot a warning glance back. “I have tried to keep you from making a terrible mistake, but you are clouded with madness. Your fate, and the consequences it brings, rest squarely now upon your shoulders.”  With that the Doctor left the office, slamming the door behind him. He briefly toyed with the idea of simply using his sonic screwdriver to lock it, but decided that it would accomplish nothing.
        As he angrily made his way back towards the TARDIS, he came across the alien Tagoo in one of the hallways.  Tagoo could see the look on the Doctor’s face, but approached him anyway.
        “Hello, Doctor. Is everything well? You seem a bit, disturbed.” He asked with a grin.
        The Doctor stopped and looked deeply into Tagoo’s eyes. “Actually, Tagoo, things are wrong. Very, very, wrong.” The Doctor decided to take a shot in the dark . “Why do you follow him Tagoo? You are not like the others. You are not military personnel, sworn to uphold his orders.”
         Tagoo just grinned. “I told you Doctor, he saved my life during a hunt, long ago.”
         “Would you mind filling me in on some of the details of his most courageous of acts?” The Doctor asked, hoping to gain insight, and maybe an ally.
         “Certainly, Doctor. It was many years ago. I was leading a hunt on the planet Thanatos Seven, are you familiar with it?” Tagoo inquired.
        “Of course I have heard of it, “ the Doctor said, his hands now clasped in front of his chest. “I avoid it like the plague. Why in all the universe would you hunt there?”
         Tagoo had an enormous grin on his face. “Simple! For us it is the most challenging place to hunt. Besides, wild treg pelts fetch a high price to the right buyer. “
         “I suppose the right buyer would be Dorium, in these parts anyway.” The Doctor quipped. “But, please go on with your tale.”
         “Our hunt had been very successful. However, as we were returning to our ship, we were ambushed.  About two dozen Cybermen from the Twelfth Cyber Legion came out of nowhere. They killed everyone in the hunting party except for me. Luckily, the then Captain Habbard and his men had been tracking them.  They managed to destroy the Cybermen and save me. From that day, I pledged my life to John Habbard.”
        The Doctor stood quiet for a moment. “Tagoo, I can see it in your eyes. You know this is a fools errand, and it will turn out all wrong.  Just do me one favor, if it comes down to your life debt or your life, choose the latter.”
    With that, he excused himself and resumed his quick pace back to the TARDIS.

    Rory had finished his snack, and was slowly making his way back to the TARDIS. As he rounded the last corner, he saw the Doctor ahead of him, moving at a fast pace. He noticed the Doctor had slammed the TARDIS doors behind him as he entered. Rory quickened his pace. Something was up, and he knew an angry Doctor was a dangerous Doctor.
   He walked through the doorway just in time to hear the end of the Doctor’s rant about stupid, pigheaded humans, and their reluctance to listen to him. Amy spotted her husband and quickly shook her head no.
    “Fools, every last one of them. Narrow minded automatons, following a strutting martinet!” The Doctor was so caught up in his vitriol, that he never noticed Rory enter the TARDIS. Amy remained silent, hoping the Doctor would calm down soon.
     As the Doctor began to calm down, Rory cleared his throat  to let the Doctor know he had returned. The Doctor looked over at him, a grimace still on his face.  “Ah, Rory the Roman. I hope you had a more productive evening then I.”
     “Well, that all depends on your idea of productive.” Rory said, matter-of-factly. “I did talk with the Captain. She is well aware of the problems with Commander Habbard. However, Doctor, she also seems to know a bit about you as well.” He had expected a far different reaction from the Time Lord than what he got.
     “That doesn’t surprise me. The Commander was kind enough to point out to me that they have files about me back on Earth. “ He glanced between this two companions a bit rapidly, “Remind me to do something about that when we have time.”
      “There is more, Doctor. “ Rory said, “Captain Buckster wanted you to know that she is aware of her duty.”
     The Doctor looked away from him, and back up at the control console. “Is that all, Rory?” he asked, seeming a bit defeated
     “Yeah, I’m afraid so. She walked away after that.” Rory looked up at Amy a bit nervously.
     “She is aware of her duty.” the Doctor repeated, almost absently. “There is that word again, duty. Such a small word, yet it’s meaning has cost countless lives in the history of the universe. Humans, there are times when your notions of duty fill me with despair.”
     It was Amy’s turn to clear her throat. “Ahem, Doctor, the TARDIS finished the scan you asked for. She found no indigenous life forms  that fit the Commanders description. However, she did curiously find some wreckage from a crashed ship a few hundred kilometers from our current location.”
     The Doctor’s mood turned in an instant . He bounded up the stairs to the scanner screen. “Pond, I could kiss you!” he exclaimed.
      “OY!” warned Rory from below.
      “Right,” the Doctor said awkwardly, “ Not kiss, I meant shake your hand.”  He looked over the reading on the scanner. “Yes, that’s it, that’s the answer I was looking for!” He looked over at Amy, “Tell me she also collected a readout of all the indigenous species.”
       Amy laughed, “Of course she did!”
        The Doctor went through the list and saw what he was looking for.  With glee, he raced back down the stairs, and towards the doors.
        Rory watched him then asked, “Where are you going now?”
        The Doctor, a huge grin on his face, looked back at the two of them. “Just going to test a theory, be back in a bit. You two stay put.”
        Amy yelled down to him, “At this time of night?”
        He smirked as he went through the doorway. “You know me. Geronimo!” And with that he was gone again.
        Amy  stood by the scanner, shaking her head. She glanced at the entry the Doctor had left on the screen. It showed a creature a bit larger than a tiger, but with far more teeth and claws. A warning was flashing at the bottom.. “Pack Hunters”

       The Doctor pulled out his sonic screwdriver. He made his way down a hallway he knew would lead to an exit from the colony.  As he suspected, it was locked, but, his screwdriver quickly made short work of that, and he was soon outside, heading in the direction of the caves. As he walked, he made a few adjustments to his sonic, so that he would be able to scan for the pack hunters he had seen on the scanner. He was beginning to suspect that they were the real reason why some of the colonists had vanished without a trace. If he was right, that would mean the Commander and his men were after the wrong life form.
     He moved as  quickly as he could through the forest. As he was finally within sight of the caves, the sun was beginning to rise. He knew his time was short. Habbard and his men would be leaving the colony at any moment, heading this way, armed to the teeth.
     He scanned the cave entrances, trying to find the most likely one to be hiding Habbard’s nemesis. There was one, towards the south east that had an opening that seemed large enough to accommodate a being the proportions the Commander had described. The Doctor quickly made his way to it, sonic screwdriver held out in front of him.
    He had only gone a few meters in when he noticed his screwdriver had picked up something. “Gotcha.” he said quietly to himself.
      Without warning there was a huge bellowing roar from deep within the cave. The Doctor looked around, spotting a small hidden alcove on the far side of the cave. He dashed into it. Mere moments later, with thundering footsteps that shook the ground, the Doctor got his first good look at the great beast.
       He was smiling in wonder. He whispered to himself, “Oh, look at you! Such a magnificent specimen!”
       The large creature grunted, then looked directly at the alcove the Doctor was hiding in. It growled and grunted some more. The Doctor realized he could understand it.
      “Ah, yes,” he began, still staying hidden, “ I suspected you were intelligent. I am not here to attack you. That would be foolish. And right about now, I am hoping you can understand me as well.”
     The creature grunted. “Ah good, you do, that will make things so much easier. Alright, I am coming out now, and I am unarmed.” He chuckled to himself a bit, “If I had a jammy dodger for every time I have had to say that…”
     He moved very slowly out of hiding, and found himself face to face with what could only be described as a mountain of flesh and muscle. Habbard’s description did not do this creature justice. It’s arms were as big around as oak trees, they hung down almost like a gorillas. The hands ended in very long and sharp claws. It’s nose was small for it’s face, yet it’s mouth was very large. Two huge fangs protruded from its lower jaw. Small horns adorned its bald head. It was the eyes that caught the Doctor by surprise the most. They were kind, almost child-like, with a wonderful yellow  center.
     The Doctor was very pleased indeed. As he was clasping his hands before him, the creature spoke in its guttural tongue. “Ah, right, I suppose introductions are in order. I am the Doctor. I have come to warn you. The humans from the colony, as I am sure you are aware, are heading this way to destroy you. They fear you, simply because they misunderstand you.”
    The beast looked at the cave entrance and growled. Then it looked back to the Doctor, and spoke some more. The Doctor began to frown. “I know, believe me. I have been trying to stop this from happening, but their leader refuses to see reason. He claims you killed his son. “
    The next thing the Doctor heard from the creature brought instant joy to his whole being. “James is alive! Please, can you take me too him?”
     With barely a grunt, the beast beckoned for the Doctor to follow him, deeper into the cave. After a walk taking them through many side tunnels and turns, with only the light from the Doctor’s sonic to illuminate the way, they finally came to a very large cavern, filled with stalactite and stalagmites.  There, in the far corner, looking perfectly content as he sat in front of a small fire, was ten year old James Habbard.
     The Doctor quickly made his way over to him, the boy cowering a bit. “Please, do not be frightened, I am here to help you. I’m the Doctor, by the way, and you must be James. I know your father. He is very worried about you.”
      James looked down at his feet. He had a sad look on his face. “Funny how he acts worried now, when before I ended up here he never seemed to even have time for me.”
      The boy’s words cut deeply into both of the Doctor’s hearts. “I know he doesn’t show it, James, but deep down, I know he loves you. “
      The boy looked away. “I bet he has all his soldiers out looking to kill my new friend. It is how he reacts to everything, with force.”
     It was the Doctor’s turn to look away. “Of that, I am certain.” he said sadly. Then he turned back to the boy. “Listen James, I need you to stay back here, no matter what happens. I am still hoping to have a happy outcome to all this.”
     The boy pulled his knees to his chest and wrapped his arms around them. “Alright, I will. Just, please don’t let my dad hurt him, he really is nice.”
     “I know he is, James, I know he is.”  The Doctor said quietly. Then he walked over to the creature. “So you, I gather you are not native to this planet, judging by the wreckage my ship detected. So, what is your story?”
      The creature began to tell his tale. The Doctor listened closely as he learned that he had been captured and taken from his home world, by a group of aliens that wanted to use his size and strength as slave labor. They had underestimated the force of nature they had on their hands. Breaking his bonds, he had killed his captors, causing the ship to crash land here on Felstar. Needing shelter, he had eventually made his way to these caves.
     The Doctor’s mood was very gloomy now. “Such a senseless waste. You, ripped from your home, to live here in seclusion. And now pursued for a crime you are innocent of. Tell me, do you have a name?”
     He grunted a few unintelligible sounds, and it made the Doctor briefly smirked. “Ah, unpronounceable, I am very familiar with that exact problem.” he said with a wink. “This just leaves me one more question. How did James end up here with you?”
     The answer he received did not shock him. “Ah, I see, you rescued him from the pack hunters. Such beautiful but deadly creatures. I am glad you were able to keep the boy from meeting the fate so many others have fallen to.”
     The Doctor stood and paced a bit. “Now, how to get through to Commander Habbard. His misguided hatred has blinded him to all reason.”
      He lifted his left arm and looked at the time on his watch. “Well, I guess I am about to find out. The both of you stay here. Give me time to talk to them.”  As he began to leave the cavern and make his way back to the entrance, the alien grunted a warning to him. The Doctor turned his head, sadness and worry on his face. “I know.” was his only reply.

     Amy and Rory had barely been alone two hours when there was a sudden pounding at the TARDIS doors. Amy ran to the console and looked at the scanner screen. Commander Habbard and his troops were standing outside, heavily armed. Rory looked at his wife. “Get ready to raise the shields, I will go and see what he wants.” he said as he bounded down the stairs towards the entrance. Amy ran over to the shield controls, waiting for the signal to put them up.
     Rory only opened the door far enough to stick his head through. “Yes?” he asked, putting on a nervous act for the Commander.
     “Where is the Doctor?” demanded the Commander without any other formalities. “He wanted to see the beast himself. Now will probably be his last chance.”
     “Um, well, he isn’t here right now. Can I take a message?” replied Rory, adding a small stammer to his speech.
    “So, he ran out on us? I figured as much, he had the look of a coward.” Habbard removed his pistol from its holster, and pointed it at Rory. “Very well then, the two of you shall join us as we hunt down and destroy the vile beast.”
    Rory, his hands unseen, signaled to Amy. With a flip of a switch, the invisible shields activated around the TARDIS. Rory then glared at the Commander. “Oh, don’t give me that. Your guns don’t scare me. My wife and I have no intention of joining this madness.”
    Habbard raised his gun and fired at Rory’s head, the bullet being absorbed and disintegrated by the shielding. Rory smirked at him. “Shall I repeat my rejection to your generous offer?”
     The Commander snarled, defeated. He turned to his men. “Let them all cower in their little box. We have a monster to kill. DEATH TO THE BEAST!”
     The soldiers all chanted the last bit as they moved away from the TARDIS and back the way they came. As the last of them filed out, Rory caught Captain Buckster’s eye. She simply put her head down and shook it. Then she too joined the death march out of the colony. All Rory could do was close and lock the door, then he let his own head sag a bit.

     The Doctor stood at the mouth of the cave, waiting for the forces lead by Commander Habbard. He knew that any moment now, they would emerge from the woods a short distance off. He also knew he had a slim chance of stopping the inevitable confrontation. The creature had made it quite clear that he would defend himself to the detriment of those that hunted him.
     His wait was not as long as he had hoped. Soon movement was spotted in the woods, and then Habbard emerged, followed closely by the large and intimidating Tagoo. The rest of his soldiers were right behind him. As the Doctor watched them approach, he noticed Tagoo was carrying a rather large piece of artillery, more like a cannon than a simple gun.
    He looked down towards his feet, steeling his resolve, then put on a happy face, and walked out to meet them. “Good morning, Commander!” he shouted to them.
    Habbard glared angrily as he spotted the Doctor. “So, the coward has decided to join us after all. I suggest you head to the rear guard position Doctor, lest you get your hands dirty.”
    As the Doctor reached him, he got a serious look on his face. “I implore you once more, Commander, end this madness now before you make a mistake.”
    “My only mistake, Doctor, was allowing you to roam free on my colony! Now, out of my way!” He pushed the Doctor aside and continued onto the cave.
     “James is still alive!” the Doctor shouted after him. This got the Commander’s attention. He stopped and turned.
     “Alive? Then the beast has him held captive!” His eye was wide, he was looking back and forth quickly.
     “No, it’s not what you think. The one you hunt saved James from the pack hunters. Surely, you know of them. You did scans of this world before you set up your colony.” the Doctor said, desperate to diffuse the situation.
     “Nice try, Doctor.” Habbard said. “We learned about them when we did our scans, the pack hunters live hundreds of kilometers from here. They were why we chose our current location, to give room between us and them. There is no way they are responsible for all this.”
     “Did it ever occur to you that they would migrate?” the Doctor asked quickly.
     “Stop stalling me Doctor, I have a beast to kill, and a son to rescue!” He looked back towards his men. ”Captain, get this man out of my sight! As for the rest of you, lets move! DEATH TO THE BEAST!”
   Captain Buckster held back the Doctor as ordered, yet she looked at him, her eyes pleading with him to end this. The others started chanting “DEATH TO THE BEAST!” and just as he suspected, the Doctor heard the alien’s roar as it came charging out of the cave toward his attackers.
    Before any of them could take aim and open fire, there was a horrible screeching from the woods. Suddenly, a very large group of the pack hunters came charging at them all. The giant bellowed loudly, and rushing past the human, he leaped headlong into the onrushing horde. Moving almost in unison, the pack leapt upon him, many being instantly thrown off. He managed to grab a few, throwing them against rocks, or slamming them to the ground. For every one he defeated, two took its place.
    The Doctor looked back at Habbard and his men, then to the cave. He was barely visible at the entrance, but James had defied the Doctor’s wishes, and came out to see what was happening. The Doctor ran towards the cave, just as a group of pack hunters charged at Habbard and his men. The men opened fire, but they were quickly overwhelmed.
    The Doctor reached James and grabbed him. “James, please, get back inside. If the hunters spot you they will tear you to pieces. Those are what your friend was protecting you from!”
    Wide eyed, James did as he was told, and ran for cover, hiding in the very alcove the Doctor had used earlier. The Doctor turned, sonic screwdriver in hand. Carnage greeted his old eyes. Habbard and his men had formed a small circle, trying to cover all sides. Men were being dragged into the woods to meet a most gruesome fate. The Doctor looked towards the giant alien. He was beginning to get the upper hand on the pack, but he had suffered many wounds in the process.
     Tagoo had managed to get into a better fighting position, and was slowly thinning the numbers of the pack hunters. He too was suffering from wounds, but his resolve could not be conquered. The Doctor was so distracted watching all this, that he did not notice a small group of the hunters heading his way. As he turned and saw them, they were preparing to leap. The giant roared, and with a mighty jump, landed near the cave entrance, putting himself between the hunters, and his two friends in the cave.
    He had very little room to maneuver in this spot, and a few of the hunters scored critical wounds to is large body. A bit further away, Habbard and his remaining men had succeeded in beating back the hunters.
    It was at this point that the Doctor heard something he wished he hadn’t. The Commander shouted out an order. “Now men, while the beast is wounded and distracted, now is out chance!”
     Before the Doctor could shout, someone else did. “NO!”  The voice belonged to Captain Buckster. “Commander, it’s over, you were wrong. Can you not see? The Doctor was right. This creature you hunt, the one that has filled you with this insanity, is trying to protect us, the Doctor, and your son!”
     “Captain, you are relieved!” Habbard spat at her.
      She calmly drew her pistol and pointed it at her commanding officer. “No sir, you are relieved, under regulation forty-six. You are no longer fit to command.”
       Habbard yelled incoherently, and was on Buckster faster then she could react. He punched her in the face, grabbed his own gun, and shot her in the shoulder. As she fell to the ground, he began shouting like a man possessed. “I AM IN CHARGE HERE! THIS IS MY COMMAND! I give the orders! I say kill the beast!” None of the other soldiers moved at his command. He began waving his pistol at them all. “I will see you all hanged, do you hear me! ALL OF YOU!”
    Suddenly a rather large fist appeared, and Commander Habbard was down on the ground, barely conscious. Tagoo was standing over him, anger and shame showing on his face. “I swore to follow you no matter where you go.” the large Queegian said quietly, “ I swore to repay the life debt, and I have done so. I have just saved you from the one thing you could not, yourself, Commander.”
     Tagoo walked away, picking up his large cannon. The alien was still struggling with the last remnants of the pack, his strength beginning to fail him. Tagoo turned back to the soldiers. “Secure the Commander, and attend to the wounded. Those not needed for such task, I say  we help that creature! Are you with me!”
     A cheer went up from the men, and they followed after Tagoo, taking out the last of the pack. The giant turned to face the men, readying itself, but a gentle hand on the back of his leg stopped him. “It’s all right, they are no longer here to harm you.”  the Doctor said to him quietly.
     James had now come out of hiding. He looked up at his giant friend, tears in his eyes. The alien turned and looked down at the boy, smiling. Then, it began to stumble, finally collapsing on the ground near the caves mouth. The Doctor quickly scanned him with his sonic.
     “I’m sorry, I am so, so sorry.” he said, looking back at James. “His wounds are too great. There is nothing any of us can do for him.”
     Tagoo was now standing near the Doctor and the fallen giant. “There is one thing, Doctor. We can honor him.”
     The Doctor brought his right hand to his eyes. The alien grunted weakly a few more times. “Yes, the boy will be safe now. You did well.”
      His breathing becoming very shallow, it spoke a few last words to the Doctor. Then , with one last great exhale, the light of life left his yellow eyes. The Doctor sagged in sorrow, then reached up and gently closed the giants eyes. By now, those that could, including the now bound Commander Habbard, and the wounded Captain Buckster, had gathered around their fallen protector.
      Habbard leered down at the fallen alien. “So, the beast wasn’t so tough after all.”
      The Doctor whipped his head around, pure anger was all it showed. He got right up into the Commander’s face. “That beast, as you call him had more nobility then you could ever have!” He looked around, there were wounded and dead everywhere, both human and pack hunters alike. “All this damned bloodshed could have been avoided, if only you had listened to me!”
       “You still try to lecture me, don’t you Doctor. The great meddler, once again.” Habbard sneered at him. “This was my situation, to deal with my way. I did not ask, nor did I want help from the likes of you!”
       The Doctor grew quiet now, yet when he spoke, the true authority in his voice could be felt by all. “How much more blood will it take for you to see how wrong you truly are, I wonder. So many of your loyal followers, dead, and for what. A simple misunderstanding.” The Doctor turned to look back into the cave, beckoning James to come forth. “Let us now see the true price you paid, John.”
    As James came into view, Habbard looked at him. “JAMES! My boy! You see, I rescued you, I upheld my promise to protect you!”  The boy looked down at his fallen friend, tears still flowing. Then he looked up at his father, but he had hatred in his eyes. His words cut deeper then any saber ever could.
    “No, all you managed to do was get my friend killed. Your answer to every thing is violence. Sometimes I wish you had been taken from me, not my mother.” He turned his back on his father, walking back over behind the Doctor.
     Habbard, pain and understanding finally dawning on him, spoke softly. “James, I..I am sorry, my only concern was keeping you safe. Can you not see that?”
     “Then why is it you only paid attention to me when I was taken from you?” the boy bit back.
      Habbard sagged, he was beaten. He had no more words to defend himself with. He fell to his knees, a single tear falling from his good eye. James looked up at the Doctor. “I want to return home, to Earth. I want to live with my Aunt Tessa.”
      The Commander looked up as he heard this. “But, I am your father.” he said weakly.
      “No,” said James, “ you were always a commander first and a father second. I do not want to end up like you.”
      The Commander shook his head, but would say no more. Captain Buckster and Tagoo walked over to the Doctor, Tagoo speaking first. “I noticed you could understand him,” he said, indicating the fallen giant, “what was it he said to you before he died?”
      The Doctor looked up into Tagoo’s eyes. “He asked that we bring him back into the cave he has called home, and seal his body inside. He said his spirit is free.”
      Captain Buckster nodded her head. “We will see too it Doctor. I, I want to say I am sorry. I should have stood up to him when this all began.”
       The Doctor looked down at her,  he tried to hide the small amount of disgust in his voice when he spoke. “What does it matter now, in the end you did your duty.” With that, he turned and walked away, trying to help with the wounded.
       The Captain lowered her head in shame. Tagoo looked down at her. “Do not worry, Captain, I do not think the Doctor will hold a grudge against you forever.”
       She looked up at him. “No, Tagoo, he might not, but he has every right in the universe to do so.”
     
        Many long hours later, after the wounded and dead had been brought back to the colony, and the giant had been sealed in his tomb, the Doctor finally returned to the familiar corridor containing the TARDIS. James would be returning to Earth on the next transport. Captain Buckster  was officially put in command, and Habbard was ordered to return to Earth for court marshal, his career finished.
       As the Doctor reached the TARDIS, he put his head against her door. He then heard rather heavy footsteps behind him. He turned and saw Tagoo heading his way, a large duffel bag slung over his shoulder.
       “Doctor, would you mind giving this tired old hunter a lift home?”  he asked, hoping the answer would be yes.
       “Sure, why not.” the Doctor answered, though he could hardly disguise the slight annoyance in his voice. “Might as well rename myself the Time Lord Taxi Driver.” With that, he snapped his fingers, opening the TARDIS doors.
     Amy and Rory were waiting inside, Rory looking a bit shocked to see Tagoo with him.
Amy could see that now was not the time to talk to the Doctor, he would need a bit of space. They would talk later, when he was ready too. She nudged Rory, and indicated that they should head to their quarters.
    As they were heading up the stairs, the Doctor spoke, loud enough so they could hear. “Human beings,” he began, “I will never , ever finish saving you lot, even from yourselves.” With that, he grew quiet again, and closed the doors.
    A short time later, there was a small thump heard in the hallway. The light on top of the police box began to flash, and the eerie whirring began. Slowly, the TARDIS dematerialized, leaving the corridor the way they had found it ,utterly empty.

          The End



    
    

Friday, August 12, 2011

Reviewiverse number 2

Reviewiverse 2

By

Kevin Scott Bolinger


    Back in the late 70’s and early 80’s Steven Spielberg was coming into his own. After the success of Jaws in 1975, he began to dabble in more personal projects. Films like Close Encounters of the Third Kind, and E.T. would go on to inspire many modern day filmmakers.  One of these is J.J. Abrams , known mainly for his hit series Lost, and the recent rebook of the Star Trek franchise.  Recently Abrams released a film which is in essence a love letter to Spielberg, that film, Super 8. Now, I will warn you, there will probably be spoilers in this review, however, the film has been out for a while now, so many have probably already seen it, or just want to get a feel for it and see if they want to watch it in a theater or wait for a rental.


    The film opens in Ohio in 1979, where we learn that a 13 year old boy, Joe Lamb, has just lost his mother in a factory accident. During the wake, a man shows up at the house to pay his respects, and Joe’s dad, one of the local deputies, takes the man away in handcuffs. We then flash forward four months later, where Joe’s best friend Charles, an aspiring film director, is working on a super 8 zombie film. He has convinced Alice, the daughter of the man arrested at the beginning, to play one of the leads.  She steals her dads car, and picks the group up, now also consisting of Cary, a pyromaniac in the making, with his sack full of fireworks, Preston, one of the players in the film, and Martin, another player in the film. Joe, it turns out, is the makeup expert.

    Alice drives them to an old train station so they can use the location to film a farewell scene in the film. As they are beginning to film, they hear an approaching train. Charles decides he wants to film the scene as the train passes for realism. As they are filming, Joe turns his head, and notices a pickup truck heading towards the crossing fast. The truck turns and slams head on into the train, causing it to violently derail. All the kids are nearly killed, but miraculously survive. Destroyed rail cars are everywhere, and the ground is littered with strange metal cubes. As Joe looks at the destruction, one of the cars shakes violently and the door is thrown off and into the air, nearly landing on him.

Chaotic train crash!

    The kids make their way to the remains of the pickup truck, and see a man slumped over the steering wheel, presumably dead. They recognize him as their biology teacher. He moves, waving a gun. He tells them to not speak of what they saw, or they would all be killed, they he tells them to run. The kids flee, with Charles grabbing his ruined camera. As he looks it over, he realizes that the entire reel of film has been shot by the camera. Joe managed to grab a cube from the crash and takes it home.

Crash scene as the kids film the next day.


    As the days go by, more and more odd occurrences happen in town. Dogs disappear, people disappear, engines are stolen from cars, wires from poles. Joe, who builds models as a hobby and is quite good at it, recognizes that the train that crashed was an Air Force train. The kids decide to keep working on the film, Charles sending off the one reel to be developed. They film on a hillside, overlooking the wreck and use it in the film.  Alice and Joe begin to draw close.  The towns Sheriff vanishes and his car is destroyed, leaving Joe’s dad in charge. He tells Joe he doesn’t want him near Alice, because of her dad, and Joe hears the same thing from Alice’s dad. Alice later tells him that on the day his mom was killed, her dad had been drunk, and couldn’t go to work. Joe’s mom had to cover for him, and she died. Joe’s dad blamed Alice’s dad this whole time.


Alice and Joe.

   Joe starts putting small pieces of the mystery together. The Military causes a fire on the outskirts of town as an excuse to evacuate it, a cover to let them recapture their cargo, an alien.  Alice, sneaking back in from visiting Joe late the night before the evacuation, gets into a fight with her dad, and runs out, getting on her bike. Her dad chases her in his car, but crashes it when she makes a quick u-turn. Her dad, bloody and hurt, sees something grab Alice in his rear view mirror, and tries to follow. The next day, at the evacuation site, Joe learns that Alice is missing, and that something took her. Knowing their teacher was somehow involved, they figure a way to sneak back into town and into their school

   They learn that the military has had the alien since the early 60’s. They had studied it all this time, but  the former scientist turned teacher had made accidental physical contact with the creature, and had a mental bond with it. He crashed the truck into the train to free the alien. The boys are captured by the Air Force as they make their way out of the school.

    Loaded on a bus, they are locked in the prisoner area at the back. The bus is attacked by the alien, and all the Air Force men are killed, but the boys manage to get out through a broken window. They are picked up by the same guy that brought them to town, but he is now too stoned to drive. Joe drives them all back towards town. His plan is to get to the cemetery, he thinks he can find the creature there.
War zone! From left, Martin, Cary, Joe, and Charles.

   In town, all the tanks and guns and missiles of the military are going crazy. Everything is firing wildly, destroying homes and businesses . The boys take shelter in a home, but an explosion blows out a wall, breaking Martin’s leg. Joe tells Charles to stay with Martin, who then tries to set martin’s leg. Joe and Cary run to the cemetery to find Alice. They bust open a huge garage door to reveal a giant subterranean tunnel entrance. The climb down and follow the tunnel to a large cavern, in which something ahs been building a giant machine with parts taken from all over town. People are hanging upside down . Joe spots Alice, but the alien returns, chewing on a human leg. He tells Cary he will circle around to the other side, and he needs him to use his fireworks to create a huge distraction. As Joe reaches Alice, the fireworks go off, and Joe gets her down. He has to slap her to get her to awaken.

   She tells him the creature just wants to go home, but Joe just wants to get back to the entrance. As they run, Cary rejoins them. The alien begins to give chase. They come to a dead end, and Joe faces the alien. He tells the creature he understands, that he knows it just wants to go, so he tells it to go. It grabs him, and through the telepathic bond, it understands, and even calls him Joe.

   The kids escape, and are reunited with Charles and Martin. Joe and Alice’s dads show up, and things begin going haywire. Anything metal is being dragged towards the water tower, now a giant magnet. As it gets stronger, all the metal blocks arrive, and they begin swirling, eventually rebuilding the alien’s ship. He boards it, takes off, and the movie ends. As the credits roll, you are treated to the super 8 zombie film the kids made.

Joe and his dad, Alice and her dad.

   This movie was not bad. It was also nothing spectacular. I found it easily average. The train crash was cool. The alien, what little of him is shown, is cool looking and flows organically.  The acting from the kids is surprisingly good. However, this is not a typical alien movie, it is really a coming of age story wrapped in a sci fi blanket.  It has it’s fun parts, but there are other parts that seem to drag. 

   As I said, this is a love letter from J.J. to Steven. Steven was the producer, so his hand does show in the finished project. The film is really an homage to the earlier Spielberg films. On that level, it does succeed. It can make those that grew up in the late 70’s and early 80”, like I did, nostalgic for that simpler era. If you are on the bubble about seeing it, check it out, you might like it. If it never got your attention from the trailers, skip it or wait for a rental. All in all, the only reviewer you need to listen too is yourself.




Artists conception of the alien.

Tuesday, June 28, 2011

Reviewiverse number 1

Reviewiverse

By

Kevin Scott Bolinger

  Hello all to a brand new feature on my blog. In this, I will review current films in theaters, or films from the past that are much loved. I will warn everyone now, for current films there will be spoilers. I had a opportunity to go see an advanced screening of Transformers 3 : Dark of the Moon, thanks to my friend Zac winning tickets from a radio contest. The film was shown in 3D, which was amazing, I must say, but will not be the focus of this review.  I will now once again give the warning:


        THERE WILL BE SPOILERS, TURN BACK NOW IF YOU DO NOT WISH TO BE SPOILED!




         YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




      Our movie opens with Optimus telling a tale of the final days of the Great War. We see the Cybertronian landscape, war ravaged. Skirmishes abound far below, as an Autobot ship is trying to get away from a few Decpticon ships in pursuit. Prime lets the audience know that the ship is carrying something that will tip the balance of the war for good. Alas, a small con fighter, Starscream in Cybertronian mode, fires at the ship as it makes it to space, damaging it and sending it tumbling away.

    We switch to Earth in 1961, where they have detected an alien spacecraft on a trajectory for the moon. As the ship crashes, we see it was the same one Starscream had shot as if fled Cybertron. It crashes, and President Kennedy declares that the United States needs to beat the Russians to the moon to examine the crashed vessel.

   We then get to July 1969, and Apollo 11 blasts off. As they approach the moons surface for landing, Armstrong and Aldrin look through classified documents.  As soon as they are in communications blackout from the Moon’s position, relative to the Earth, they are to make their way to the craft and explore. They do so, and we learn there are no survivors. They bring a few trinkets back to Earth.
The true reason we went to the moon?

    We then get to modern times. Sam is now living with new girlfriend Carly, as well as Wheelie and Brains. He is out of work and has many interviews. Meanwhile , the NEST group has been used to take care of major political situations abroad, using the Autobots as uber weapons.  One mission brings Optimus, and Ratchet to Chernobyl, where they detect energon.  While being spied upon by Laserbeak, Lennox and his team find a piece of Cybertronian tech linked to Earth tech. Suddenly they are attacked by a huge Cybertronian worm. Optimus springs into action, his trailer become a weapons bay. He manages to retrieve  the Cybertronian artifact as the worm retracts to reveal it’s master, Shockwave. As that was all going on, Laserbeak assassinates the Russian official that led NEST there.

    As they return to NEST headquarters, we see the Autobots all sent to separate bays for various maintenance, and Skids and Mudflap make a blink and you will miss the appearance as the cars enter the garage. A female government official shows up, demanding to know if NEST was involved in a few highly dubious missions overseas. Lennox tries to give her the runaround, but she wont have that. She demands answers and wants to speak to Optimus. Ironhide informs her that now is not a good time to bother Optimus, because he is, for lack of a better word, pissed. Still in truck mode, Optimus has sat in the bay since his return, not speaking to anyone. Ironhide bops him on the roof to get him to come forth. He transforms and informs everyone that the humans have lied to the Autobots. The sphere from Russia came from the Ark, the crashed ship on the moon.

    Optimus and Ratchet then take an Autobot ship to the moon to see the wreck themselves. There, in the crash chamber, they recover Sentinel Prime, and five rods he had with him. They return to Earth.
Sentinel Prime

    During all this, Sam finally lands a job, in a mail room, on the recommendation of one of the companies board members. One of the managers, a small Asian man, begins following Sam suspiciously.  As days go by, Sam learns that Carly’s boss was the one that gave him the recommendation. Sam does not like the guy, because he is too friendly with Carly. Back at his mail room job, he is stopped in an elevator by the asian manager, who takes his coat to get Sam to follow him in the bathroom. Inside, he gives him papers with information needed about the real reason behind the moon landings. 

    Sam, who has been treated badly by the government and tossed aside, not even allowed to have Bumblebee with him anymore, goes over the information and realizes how important it is. He goes to confront the manager, and the man is acting strange. Though Sam cannot see it, the mans hand his trapped by the computers mouse. The man chases Sam out of his office, and the computer transforms, revealing Laserbeak, who tells the man he is going to suicide him. He does so by pushing him out a window. Laserbeak then attacks Sam, but he manages to evade the Decepticon.

    Sam gets Carly, and makes for the NEST base, there the guards give him a rough time, till Sam grabs one of their radios and calls for Bumblebee, who comes out, not looking favorably on the guards. Lennox then comes to get Sam and Carly.  Sam gives Lennox the information, and the woman from the Government is none to happy, she has Sam brought to her office, and tells him he is not needed, he is not a soldier, just a messenger boy. Sam informs her of how he was attacked by a Decepticon earlier, and Bumblebee is reassigned to him.

   Meanwhile, in the repair bay, Optimus uses the Matrix to revive Sentinel. The five rods are locked away. We then learn that the rods for a space bridge. Sentinel invented the technology, and only he can use it. 

     In and African plain, we see a rusty big rig arrive near some elephants. It transforms and Megatron is revealed, looking worse for wear. He makes his way to a tent like structure, where there are hatchlings, as well as Soundwave. Small parasitic bots crawl all over him, picking at his damaged head.  Starscream arrives, as well as Laserbeak. Both inform him that the Autobots have taken the bait. He orders Soundwave to move forward with the plan.
The Road Warrior called, they want their truck back...

    Sam wants to get to the bottom of all this mess, so he enlists the help if former agent Simmons, now a successful author. Simmons now has a personal bodyguard named Dutch, who is more then he seems. Sam calls Simmons, and Dutch uses a scrambler to make the line secure. Sam then give enough hint to Simmons to get him to join him.

    A few days later, Simmons is with Sam in Carly’s loft, using Brains as a laptop to help search for the information they require. Upon finding what they need, they travel to seek out two former Russian Cosmonauts. After letting them know that they know about what really happened on the moon, the Cosmonauts show them images taken by Russia in the mid 60’s. It shows hundreds of the rods that Sentinel had, dragged across the surface and stacked neatly. Sam realizes Sentinel is the key and must be protected.

    The Autobots then race to Protect Sentinel and get him back to NEST headquarters. They are attacked on a highway by the Dreads, but manage some really cool escapes. Simmons is tossed from his car and left for dead. Sentinel gets back to the base, as the other Autobots prepare to fight the  Decepticons. Ironhide goes head to head with two of the Dreads and smashes into them, as all three transform. Sideswipe joins him, and they have a Mexican standoff. The Dreads try and pull as fast one, but Ironhide and Sideswipe make fast work of them.

     When they return to NEST base, Sentinel transforms, and they learn the truth. He was not bringing the space bridge technology to the Autobots at the end of the war, he was bringing it to Megatron. He tells then that he had seen the devastation the war brought, and decided the only way to survive was to join the enemy, to put an end to the war. He then attacks Ironhide, shooting him several times with an acid based weapon. Ironhide dies, and begins to melt. Sentinel then attacks the interior of the base and retrieves his rods, escaping with them.

    Earlier, Carly, in a new car given to her by her boss, had an argument. She leaves him to attend a work function, and Sam had returned to his research. After Sentinel’s attack, he seeks out Carly.

   Meanwhile, Megatron and Starscream arrive and the Lincoln memorial, where Megatron destroys the statue and makes the seat his throne. Sentinel sets up a small space bridge in the reflecting pool and brings Decepticon reinforcements that had been hiding on the moon. Optimus confronts him, but Sentinel quickly beats him down, but sparing his old friend.  Optimus, seeing they are overwhelmed, orders a retreat.

     Sam then find Carly at her bosses house, and as they try to leave, he finds out her boss has been working with the Decepticons. Carly’s new car turns out to be Soundwave, and he holds her captive to ensure Sam will cooperate. Her boss slaps a Decepticon on Sam’s wrist, which attaches itself to him, and turns into a wrist watch. They will now know everything Sam sees and hears. He is ordered to figure out Optimus’s plan.

   They next day, Sentinel addresses the leaders of Earth, demanding the Autobot renegades be removed from Earth. NEST is shut down, and at Cape Kennedy we see an Autobot ship merged with a space shuttle. It is taken care of by the Wreckers, three Autobots with a NASCAR addiction. All the Autobots board the ship, Optimus telling Sam he has no plan. A few hours later, the ship is launched. As it reaches altitude, Starscream zooms down from space, transforms and blasts the ship to pieces.
Shockwave, one bad bot!

   With the Autobots now dead, the Decepticons make their move. Carly is taken hostage to Chicago, where the Decepticons begin to lay siege. The city quickly falls to the, thousands are killed. Megatron and Sentinel are on top of one of the towers, where Sentinel reveals he is going to bring Cybertron to Earth and use the human race as slaves to rebuild it. Megatron revels in the fact Sentinel is working for him, but Sentinel quickly grabs Megatron;s head, pulling out more wires and circuits, further degrading him. Sentinel shows who is really in charge.

    The city is blocked off, nothing is getting in or out. All fighter jest are quickly shot down. Chicago is now a fortress. Sam wants to rescue Carly. Eps, who had quit NEST long ago, but still helped keep an eye on some of the Autobots while they were there, agrees to put a team together to help. When they get to Chicago though, the team realizes its hopeless. A Decepticon fighter comes down to attack them, but is suddenly shot down. As they turn, Optimus is standing there, holding a giant shotgun. The Autobots had fooled everyone, hiding in the first booster to be jettisoned from their ship. All Starscream had done was destroy an empty vessel.

   Battles erupt over the city, as the Autobots begin to fight back. Everyone’s goal in to destroy the control rod before Cybertron can be brought to Earth. Various action scenes unfold. Sam rescues Carly, only to become trapped in a skyscraper with Eps and his men as Shockwaves pet destroys the center of the building. Optimus, in his flight armor, swoops in and destroys the worm, but a shot from Shockwave causes him to crash into some cranes, becoming entangled in the wires, upside-down. The Wreckers spot him and try to get to him.
TIMBER!

   Meanwhile, after escaping the crashing building, thanks to Optimus, Eps, his men, Sam and Carly are all back on the ground. Sam and Carly are attacked by Starscream, and Sam uses a grapple device given to him by Autobot inventor Que, and he rips out Starscream’s eye. As Starscream is screeching and flailing, Sam takes a spiked bomb Que also gave him, and jams it in Starscream’s other eye. Lennox and his team, after having made a daring jump into the city with heavy casualties, comes to Sam’s aid as the grapple still has him attached to Starscream, with the bomb getting ready to detonate. As Starscream lashes out in pain and anger at being blinded, Lennox cuts the wire, and he and Sam fall from a building as Starscream’s head explodes, killing him. Bumblebee shows in the nick of time to catch the two.
An eye for an eye...

    Some time later, most of the Autobots, sans the Wreckers, Optimus, Wheelie and Brains, have been captured by Shockwave, Soundwave, and Barricade.  Soundwave is happy to have the prisoners, when Carly’s boss points out that they should not keep them as prisoners, but make examples out of them.  Soundwave agrees, and decides to make them trophies. He takes Que, and shoots him in the back, then a generic drone Decepticon finishes the Autobot inventor off. Bumblebee is next to be taken for execution. As Soundwave is powering his blaster, Decepticon fighter craft begin falling out of one of the large carriers overhead. Wheelie and Brains had snuck aboard and sabotaged the ship.  As it crashes into the river, we are left wondering if the two brave little Autobots survived.  The distraction lets the Autobots fight back, and also allows Lennox and Eps and their respective teams to set up an ambush. A sniper Shoots Barricade in the eye, and  gets a few shots on Shockwave. Soundwave is killed by Bumblebee as the two fight.

   Optimus, being freed by the Wreckers, joins the fight. He flies in, killing Barricade. He then fights with a slightly damaged Shockwave, who seems to take a lot of damage before finally succumbing to the blades of Prime.  Meanwhile, Carly finds Megatron sitting down in an alley, looking like a homeless person. He is mumbling to himself, and as she approaches, he halfheartedly threatens her. She then taunts him , finishing by referring to him as Sentinel’s bitch. Enraged, he moves to strike her, but realizes she is right.

   Optimus and Sentinel fight, with Sentinel gaining the upper hand. He slices off Prime’s right arm, and pins him to the ground. As he begins to deliver a killing blow, Megatron attacks him, and beats the old bot down.  Megatron then looks at prime and wonders where Optimus would be without him, as he prepares to kill his mortal enemy. Optimus declares that he will find out, and with one arm, e=he beats down and rips off Megatron’s head, killing him finally. He then walks over to Sentinel, badly wounded, who pleads with Optimus. Optimus executes him with his shotgun. San hits Carly’s boss with a piece of metal, sending him into the control rod, which fries him. Bumblebee and Ratchet then attack the rod, destroying it, and destroying Cybertron in the backwash of the collapsing space bridge, with many Decepticon ships also being sucked in and destroyed. This is where the movie ends, the Autobots finally victorious, but at the cost of thousands of human lives and the destruction of a major city.

     My thoughts on this film. It was good, probably the best of the three Bay Transformers films. It took him three tries to get it right, with one major exception.  The fights are no longer fast paced blurs where you cannot tell what is going on. The acting is better. The Autobots get more screen time. The plot, though lifted from several G1 episodes mashed together, does flow nicely with very few holes. All that being said, I do have one complaint.

    Megatron. For those of us that grew up watching the old show, or even some of the newer ones, he was the ultimate embodiment of evil. In this film though, he is little more then a broken down warrior, grasping at the final straws of a plan initiated thousands of years ago. His mind is damaged, from the battle at the end of Revenge of the Fallen. He wields no control over his own forces. He is little more then a pawn, used, abused, and in the end, destroyed when his usefulness has come to an end.  He deserved better, yet what he got was a last hurrah in fighting Sentinel, only to be taken down in seconds by a badly damaged Optimus.

CYBERTRONIAN RAGE!!!!!!!!

    One other thing that made me groan is a certain line thrown in to Star Trek fans, spoken by Sentinel. He tells Optimus that he is doing what he is doing because " The needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few." A famous line, no doubt, but in this context it is evil. I imagine Leonard Nimoy in the recording booth, looking at Bay and saying "really? you seriously want me to say that line...again?"

   Now that I have that out of the way, I will say I really did enjoy this. I went in with low expectations, due to the previous film, but I left with a smile. Michael Bay has redeemed himself a bit. He really can make a decent film if he controls his impulses.  I highly recommend it to anyone. Keep in mind, it is PG-13, and there are a number of robot and human deaths. Humans seem to explode, with bones being lefts behind as they are hit by Decepticon weaponry. If your child can handle such things, then by all means bring them, but use your better judgment.

     I look forward to others seeing this film and giving their opinions. Feedback is most definitely welcomed on this one. I left a few things out, like the bits with Sam’s parents, and other  small plot points. In a nutshell, this is a good summer blockbuster. Till next time, be well!

Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Ship of the Week / Month 2

Ship of the week/month 2

By

Kevin Scott Bolinger


   Ahoy and welcome aboard. Here we are at my second ever look at a famous ship from the past. Last week, we inaugurated this blog by taking a maiden voyage aboard the SS UNITED STATES. This week, I thought we would delve into a liner that came into being close to the turn of the 20th  century. This weeks ship is one whose name is nearly as famous as the TITANIC herself. I give to you, my look at the Royal Mail Steamer LUSITANIA.
Cunard Line's first Ocean Greyhound, the RMS LUSITANI

      One cannot look at the LUSITANIA without first looking back at the key piece of technology that made her and her sister, the MAURETANIA the fastest ships of their era. That technology was the steam turbine. The turbine was invented by Charles Parsons in 1884, and was initially used for generating electricity. However, Parsons knew his design could greatly enhance the speed and efficiency of most ocean going vessels. To prove this, he built a steam yacht, the TURBINIA. In 1897, to show off the speed of his invention, Parsons brought the TURBINIA to Queen Victoria’s Jubilee Naval Review, uninvited of course. The fastest warships tried to chase down Parsons, but with a top speed of 27 knots, the warships were left in the wake of the little TURBINIA , with her top speed of 34 knots.  Many ship builders were present at this little demonstration, and Parsons was soon being queried about his marine turbine engine.
Just prior to launch

    The Cunard line was the most interested in exploring this technology, and already had begun imagining two very large ocean liners which they were hoping to power with these turbines. However, they wanted a side by side comparison between the normal quadruple expansion steam engine, currently in use, and the new marine turbine.  They had two sister ships currently on the stocks, nearing the end of their construction. They decided to fit one of them, the CARMANIA, with the turbines, and her sister, the CARONIA, with the traditional engines. The CARMANIA  proved to be the faster and more economical of the two, and so it was decided to only use turbines to power the two new express liners that were on the drawing board.

    Cunard did have one problem, however, in the form of John Pierpont Morgan. Morgan was trying to create a monopoly on the North Atlantic. He had acquired many shipping lines already, with his crowning achievement being the recent purchase of Cunard’s chief rival, the White Star Line. Cunard used this to their advantage in getting parliament to agree to helping foot the bill for the two new ships, since it would mean keeping the Cunard line in British hands. The Admiralty, however, demanded that the two ships be built to their specifications, for quick conversion to armed merchant cruisers in the even of war. This would come to play in the loss of the LUSITANIA in World War 1.
The launch!

     Her keel was laid in 1904, as was that of her sister, however, they were built at two separate shipyards.  LUSITANIA was built at the John Brown shipyard, the same yard that would later give birth to the QUEEN MARY . Her sister, MAURETANIA,  was built by Swan Hunter shipyards, same yard that would build in the same timeframe, the RMS CARPATHIA, famous for being the ship that rescued the TITANIC’s survivors in 1912. LUSITANIA would be launched first, on June 7, 1906, just shy of two years since her keel was laid. At the time of her launch she was the largest ship in the world, a title she would hold until her sister was launched.  She was also the first quadruple screw liner to ever be launched.

    Her fitting out took another year, as craftsmen from all over descended upon the John Brown Shipyard ready to turn the empty hull into a true floating palace. When they were done, she would be called at times the Versailles of the seas. Her long slender hull form just screamed of speed. Her four evenly spaced funnels had a look of power and safety.  She would easily capture the Blue Riband for the fastest crossing on her maiden voyage. Eventually the Riband would go to her sister, who would hold it for an incredible 22 years.
Maiden New York arrival.

    She quickly became a popular ship, and was welcomed everywhere she went. She had a loyal following of passengers who preferred her over her sister, however, in the beginning, she had her teething problems. Her stern had to be overhauled and stiffened, due to massive vibration when the ship was at speed. This was caused by the design of her propellers and their proximity to the hull. The stiffening helped some, but a new design of propeller ended up helping as well. She would cruise at a brisk 25 knots on most crossings.

    Company pride was always very high on Cunard ships, so much so that, in 1911, when White Star’s new massive liner, the RMS OLYMPIC arrived in New York on her maiden voyage, LUSITANIA’s captain refused to salute the new rival as his ship was making her way past on her way out to sea.  It would later become a bit of irony that these two bitter rivals would one day be forced to merge, in order to save British shipping, and complete the massive Hull 504, rusting silently in the John Brown Shipyard during the great depression.

     Her life was never marred by tragedy, Cunard had a reputation of having never lost a paying customer on one of their ships. Her normal routine was almost never disturbed, except for yearly dry dockings for repairs, hull scrapping and repainting. All that would change, however, with the outbreak of World War 1.

    The Admiralty quickly called and requisitioned many merchant ships for war use. LUSITANIA  and her sister were no exceptions. However, it was quickly noticed that the fuel requirements for the larger liners was far more then the Admiralty was able to justify.  Though MAURETANIA would go on to become both a hospital ship and troop transport,  LUSITANIA  was returned to Cunard for use in her civilian role. It was shortly after this that Germany declared unrestricted submarine warfare around the British isles.

     Germany’s declaration came because of the tactics being deployed by many merchant ships. Guns were hidden below decks, and when a submarine would surface, following the cruiser rule for the capture of enemy vessels, the merchantmen’s guns would pop up on deck, and sink the submarine. With the loss of a number of these new weapons of naval warfare, the German leader Kaiser Wilhelm, decided to shoot first and ask questions later. Most nations protested, but that did not stop the German U-boats. 

    In late April of 1915, the LUSITANIA was tied up in New York, being provisioned for her next crossing, scheduled for May 1st.  Meanwhile, in Washington D.C. the German Embassy had issued a warning to travelers and had it printed in many newspapers. In an ironic twist, in many of them it was posted next to the announcement for the LUSITANIA’s next departure.  The warning read as follows :

Notice!
Travellers intending to embark on the Atlantic voyage are reminded that a state of war exists between Germany and her allies and Great Britain and her allies; that the zone of war includes the waters adjacent to the British Isles; that, in accordance with formal notice given by the Imperial German Government, vessels flying the flag of Great Britain, or any of her allies, are liable to destruction in those waters and that travellers sailing in the war zone on the ships of Great Britain or her allies do so at their own risk.
Imperial German Embassy
Washington, D.C. 22nd April 1915

Though the warning was posted, few took it seriously, and only a few cancelled their bookings. After all, not even Germany would sink a fully loaded passenger ship, especially one carrying neutral American citizens.

     On May 1st, 1915, as scheduled, the LUSITANIA backed away from her pier for the last time. Her bow was swung downstream, and she sailed down the Hudson river, into the North Atlantic, and into history.
Captain William Turner, final captain

    Meanwhile, near the Old Head of Kinsale, an Irish landmark many ships used in helping to plot a course to Queenstown, now known as Cobh, a German U-boat had been on the prowl, sinking many merchant ships, and even a schooner.  This was the U-20, under the command of Walter Schwieger . Hunting had been good for Schwieger and his crew, yet now, their fuel running low, and down to their last two torpedoes, it was time to head home.  The date was May 7th, 1915. Schwieger took one last look through his periscope, and spotted what would be the biggest prize from this trip. He began to stalk the mysterious four funneled giant that had crossed his path.

   During the crossing, not all of the LUSITANIA’s boilers had been fired, to conserve fuel during war time. The ship made the crossing at a much lower speed then she normally was capable of. Her orders were to plot a zig-zag course through the war zone. On May 6th, her captain William Turner, had received two warning from the Admiralty about the submarine prowling near Kinsale. Turner posted extra lookouts on the bow and stern.

   Schwieger watched the big steamer through his periscope.  She was coming in close to the Old Head of Kinsale, however, he was not lined up for a good shot. He feared this prize would escape his grasp, but even if it did, he had a successful trip. He and his men would return to Germany heroes.
The U-20, nemesis

   As the ocean greyhound approached land, she was met by heavy fog at 6am on the morning of the 7th. Turner slowed her down to 15knots, and ordered depth soundings, to keep the ship from running aground. By 10am the fog had lifted, and speed was brought up to 18 knots. By noon, bright sunshine greeted her. Shortly after 2pm, Turner decided to take a reading off the Old Head of Kinsale, the ship was only a few miles off shore. He ordered a small course correction…

   Schwieger could not believe his eyes. As he watched, the prize he though had escaped him, suddenly made a small turn, and came right into his crosshairs. He took his readings, gave his orders for the torpedo settings, and fired…

    On the LUSITANIA’s bow, a young lookout spotted a foam trail heading for the ships starboard bow. He called out, but it was too late. The ship shuddered as the torpedo hit, just aft of the first funnel, the blast destroying a lifeboat hanging above. Within seconds, a another explosion rocked the ship, this one larger, and electricity was quickly lost. On the bridge, Turner ordered the ship turned hard-a-starboard, to try and reach land an beach her, but the helm was no longer responding. Already she had taken on a list.
Torpedo hit!

   Panic quickly set in, as the ship was plunged into darkness within.  Unfortunately,  a number of passengers were in the ships elevators when the power was lost, these would become their tombs. Unlike the TITANIC  disaster a few years before, the LUSITANIA  had plenty of lifeboats to go around. The problem came when the crew tried to launch them. Those on the port side were hampered by the starboard list, the boats could not be swung far enough out to clear the hull. Many would get caught on rivets, and tip, dumping passengers on the hull, only to be crushed by the now falling lifeboat. Her port side soon became red with blood. On the starboard side, the boats were now hanging too far away from the ship to be safely entered. All in all, she carried 48 boats, but only 6 were successfully launched as she sank.
Ten minutes into the sinking.

   Within ten minutes of the hit, her  forecastle was already being covered as her bow sank lower and lower. Her screws were already clearing the sea as the stern rose out of the water. People jumped from the rail, to the few boats below. On the bridge, Captain Turner stayed at his post, till the water rushed in, broke the door, and swept him overboard.  The water was only 300 ft deep, the ship was close to 800 ft long. What this meant was the bow of the ship struck the bottom before the stern even left the surface. Soon, the rest of the great liner would join the bow now resting on the sea floor. In total, 18 minutes would elapse from the time the torpedo hit, and the second water closed over her stern plates.

    Many passengers had little time to react, this would lead to the high number of losses suffered, most trapped within the hull itself. Others would drown or succumb to the 50 degree waters they now found themselves in. Out of  1,959 , 1,198 would be lost, with only 761 surviving. Help would soon arrive in the form of many fishing vessels from Queenstown. Captain Turner would survive, he was later seen walking the streets of Queenstown, soaked and looking dazed.
The end is near...

   As Schwieger looked through his periscope, he watched the human carnage. He never intended for this to be the final result. As he watched, he finally saw the ships name. He turned to his crew and said “That is the LUSITANIA  we have just sunk. “  He then ordered the periscope lowered and set a course for home. He would be welcomed as a hero, a special medal would be struck and presented to all the members of his crew. Schwieger himself would not see the end of the war. While in command of U-88 his boat was depth charged and sunk, with no survivors.

    The loss of the LUSITANIA  would be on of the few key events that would eventually drag the United States into the Great War. Of the 133 Americans on board, 129 were killed, including famous millionaire Alfred Vanderbilt. It was decried across the world as an act of barbarism. Newspapers vilified Kaiser Wilhelm and his officers and men.  An inquiry was held in London, but it was pretty much a whitewash. Turner did make a few mistakes, slowing down while entering a known U-boat attack zone, not zig-zagging.
None of these were held against him.

   Much has been said over the last century about what the ship had in her hold. It is true she was carrying crates of ammunition for the war effort, though the type and amount would not account for the second explosion. One theory put forth by Dr. Robert Ballard, the man who lead the joint Franco-American team that discovered the wreck of the TITANIC, was that, due to her design, a coal dust explosion likely occurred. Unlike most liners of the day, who had transverse coal bunkers, the LUSITANIA and her sister were designed to Admiralty specs, meaning, like most warships of the day, the coal bunkers ran the length of the ship. In theory this would minimize the impact of a torpedo or mine, because the loose coal would absorb the blast. However, as the LUSITANIA approached the Irish coast, many of  bunkers were empty, now filled with just dust. Coal dust can be very flammable and explosive when mixed with oxygen. Ballard suggests that the initial impact of the torpedo kicked up the dust in the bunker it hit, causing it to ignite in a second, larger explosion, one powerful enough to knock out the ships power.

   Other theories state that it may have been the sudden entry of cold water hitting the red hot boilers, and causing a few of them to explode violently. Most theories have merit, and the true cause of the second explosion may never be known. All that is know is that the second explosion caused enough damage to sink one of the newest and safest ships afloat within only 18 minutes. To put that in perspective, the TITANIC, which had an iceberg cause 300 ft of damage along her starboard hull, sank in 2 hours and 40 minutes. The speed at which the LUSITANIA sank is what caused the death of so many. If only she had sank slower, more lives may have been spared by the use of the lifeboats.

   The wreck herself has not had the best of luck. It has, over the years, been struck by many depth charges, both in World War 2 and in the 1950’s when she was used as target practice. In the 1980’s, three of her four propellers were recovered. One still exists, at a Maritime museum, not far from the wreck herself.  She is nearly unrecognizable as a ship now, only her bow still has the look of a ship, the rest of her hull and superstructure have collapsed. Occasionally, the currents will uncover a human skull amid the wreckage. Fishing nets now drape her shattered remains. 
The wreck, as it was in the mid 1990's

    Some ships have the sad fate of being beached and cut up for scrap. Others can survive as floating hotels or convention centers. Still others can be sunk for use as artificial reefs. However, there are some whose fate sticks in the public consciousness, mainly for how they were lost. The LUSITANIA belongs in the later group. Her name evokes the terror of war. Her loss while still in her civilian role became a war cry for some on the battlefields of Europe. We can learn from the mistakes made, mourn those lost, but in the end we can only move on to the next event in the long sad history of warfare.

    Thank you for joining me on this voyage into history.  Please feel free to comment and give me suggestions for other ships you would like to see featured here. Till then, enjoy the journey of life, Bon Voyage!


A propeller recovered from the wreck.